Thread:Vincetick/@comment-29304659-20160726134241/@comment-29304659-20160726153610

I understand where you're coming from, but some tenses are mixed up. Take for instance, "After hearing her speaking like that, Sumire changed her mind and managed to convince her to follow their families instructions, at least until Tsumugi becomes a university student."

It should be, "After hearing that, Sumire changed her mind and convinced/persuaded/ Tsumugi to follow their families' instructions until Tsumugi would attend university."

Does it look better?